LI: I am learning tom upload my learning tasks to my blog and write about them
LI: use the P.O.W.E.R writing process to structure and write a narrative that interests a audience.
The Sly Fox
The full moon was out and it was Dark cloudy, cold, and Still. It was Noah's turn to do the dishes because his troublesome sister wouldn't do her week. So Noah had to think of a plan, a plan that could get him out of doing his sister's chores. So he sprinted to his room and climbed out his window and took off into the deep dark frightening woods, little does Noah know there are sly foxes on the loose…
When Noah was halfway into the woods with No food, No water, No warm clothes, or anything to survive… Then Noah had to have a rest so he sat down near a HUMONGOUS oak tree. He had a little rest and when he opened his eyes he noticed that he was staring straight into sly foxes' deep dark eyes. The fox was a smokey orange color with a snow-white tummy he had pointy dirty blond ears that would stick up when he heard a sudden move. Noah got petrified and started to panic. He was staring into a fox's soul… He didn't know what to do but sit there and watch this fox circle him. Then from the unknown Noah heard a deep frightening voice that said ‘’Don't be scared you're our only hope’’. Noah didn't know what emotion to feel. He was so frightened and had cold shivers going down his spine. He had a good think about what was going on and thought that he should follow what the voice said “don't be frightened’’. So Noah stood up and followed the fox… He followed the fox into a dark sturdy cave. As Noah was walking into the cave he had butterflies in his stomach and so many thoughts going through his head. He then looked up and saw a whole pack of foxes eyeing him right into his eyes. At this moment Noah realized that it was a bad idea to have listened to the voice he heard.
Noah was so scared and had no clue what to do about it. He stood there in fear of why all these foxes were staring right at him. Again he had to think of a plan. Noah couldn't run Because there were foxes everywhere he looked. There were foxes to his left, foxes to his right, foxes in front of him, and foxes behind him. He didn't have a clue what to do. Noah thought and thought even harder than DING. A brilliant idea came to Noah's mind. He knew and learned that foxes got frightened when they heard a loud noise, So Noah thought that if he clapped or made a loud noise the foxes would all run back into the deep dark sturdy cave.
So Noah clapped as loud as he could and all he saw was the foxes lay down on their bellies as frightened as a mouse when it saw a cat. Then all I could hear was the foxes jump and their feet were stumping and it echoed in the cave. I ran when the sight was clear of foxes, I ran out of the deep dark sturdy cave and I was hoping the foxes were so deep in the cave they couldn't hear my footsteps echoing I ran home and jumped into bed hopefully no one could hear me. And that was the story of the day I listened to a deep frightened voice in the woods.
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For writing this week we had to write a narrative about a fox this is my narrative.
Do you enjoy writing narrative story's?
LI: I am learning how to upload my learning tasks to my blog and write about it
In my spare time and when I can I enjoy Moto X riding. For me it makes me feel free and cheers me up, I feel happy when I ride and I go into my own little world. Riding is such a passion and I really enjoy it!
What is one of your hobbies that takes you into your own world?
This is my Maths quiz about Decimals, Fractions and percentages. I used google slides to make it and it took a while because I had to link up all the slides.
What are you best at Decimals, Fractions or Percentages?
Jamol & PJ's Trip to Titania
Ever since Jamol was a young little boy his ambition was to make a rocket ship with his own hands and blast off into space where all the big bright stars are, the big bright yellow sun, the moon and all the other planets. But… the main planet Jamol wanted to go and explore was Titania. Titania isn't actually a planet, it's a moon that belongs to Uranus. There was just something about this moon that he loved. A few years later Jamol turned twenty and his German Shepherd that he has had for a long time, PJ, just turned seven.So at this point Jamol wanted to do his biggest ambition, create his own rocket ship with his own hands.He worked day and night twenty four seven trying to complete his very own project. Finally five years later he was finished! Now it was time to blast off into his dream!
Finally at twenty five years of age Jamol and PJ got all geared up in their brand new space gear and climbed into their spacecraft. They jumped in, pushed a big bright red button and the button counted down from 10! As the spacecraft was counting down Jamol was so excited and happy that his dream was coming true. It got down to 1 and the spacecraft blasted off into space. He was so happy he was crying with joy. When they finally arrived near Titania as they were about to land on Titania the spacecraft was going CrAzY and suddenly broke down. They were falling so fast they didn't know what to do! It his Titania so hard that the spacecraft broke into smithereens! When Jamol eventually woke up from the cRaSH something terrible happened…
PJ WAS MISSING! Jamol was so upset, frightened and scared because his dog that he has had for a long time was missing on a MOON! PJ could be anywhere. But then…
Jamol went searching and after about 10 minutes he found PJ with old bits of wood and metal! Jamols face lit up with happiness as he ran over and gave PJ a big hug! And PJs response was a big sloppy lick! After seeing PJ JAmol finally
realized all the bits of wood and metal and decided to do something with it to get back to earth!
Jamol used his smart thinking brain and made something out of it! A roller coaster. He worked on it for a while and made a cart for PJ and himself and also made some rails. He pushed the rails off Titania and luckily it actually landed on earth then Jamol and PJ jumped into the cart and held on very extremely tightly. They were going so fast that they were on earth in NO TIME.
After that day Jamol was so happy that his dream came true.
Kylah Tahere.
For writing this term it had to be a narative story about space and a moon from Uranus. My teacher entered us into a writing competition and your writing had to be 300 words plus I am very proud of myself because I got 482 words in total.
